Nice words Retro, sort out some of the bits of punctuation and grammar (it's not its, are not is at the end) and you'll keep the pedants happy!!
Also don't forget that Marshals aren't just the guys and girls on the bank who move cars and wave flags. There are other disciplines, pits, startline, race 'phones etc. - I know you've trying to put a small precis together but there are lots of people who aren't attracted to the "bank" stuff who might go past your post.
Good luck and thanks for trying to encourage people.
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